PETER J. RESTIVO
What makes a good newspaper quote or broadcast sound bite? It’s not what you say, it’s how you say it. Nor is it a question of content versus hype. It’s a question of giving reporters what they (and their viewers) want – in simple language and word-picture messages that keep listeners, viewers and readers engaged.
Some examples:
Blah, blah, blah…. | Snappy Sound Bite |
The environmental impact of the recent chemical spill in the western community cannot be calculated in the loss of wildlife habitat and ground water contamination alone because the full extent of the event will affect drinking water, school playgrounds, tourism and even the region’s tax base.
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This is the Pearl Harbour of chemical spills. |
Free trade agreements don’t consider loss of jobs at home and the lost contributions to society and the local tax base of hard working citizens.
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If I’m out of a job, who pays the mayor’s salary? |
Insurance companies expect and demand payment of policy premiums on time or they threaten you with loss of policy protection and cancellation. |
Insurance companies want their payments by FedEx and we get our claims by Pony Express. |
Our nursing staff is one of the most experienced in North America with an average ten years of bedside nursing.
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Nobody cares more than our nurses. |
Serious criminal offenders with records of repeated offenses while on parole represent a grave threat to the community and while our group recognizes the expense of such a plan, we believe it is in the long-term best interest of all.
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Tigers belong in the jungle or in the zoo. |
Your purpose in creating a good quote or sound bite is to get it used and to make it memorable. Sound bites without great action verbs are not descriptive and rely too much on wordy adjectives and other supporting mechanisms.
Create sound bites with imagery – word pictures. Word picture require little or no explanation. The audience “gets it.”
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Our university graduating students are like lighthouses;
they light the way for others. -
This pickup truck is built like a rock.
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This stereo system rocks.
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The new plan is like a duck in an oil spill.
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Some products are like a breeze; ours is the wind.
Remember: while reporters write the stories (not you or your lawyers), only you can write the quotes and sound bites. Try it.
CONTACT: p.restivo@prmediaconnection.com